I love that you preserved the texture of her skin and hair. The freckles and stray hairs (also is that a small scar on her left forearm, right under your sig?) are, to me, what makes this photo "WOW!" instead of just "good".
Bellissima foto! Adoro come la luce si adagia sui dettagli esaltandoli! Mi sembri molto brava! ^^ Se ti va di dare qualche consiglio e soprattutto se hai tempo e voglia, vieni a dare un'occhiata alla mia gallery! ^^ Ciao!
I believe the squared crop with your most critical focused area and least focused area both being towards the upper hand left corner serves well to capture the person as well as the emotion behind the picture. Overall a well composed shot to add substance to an otherwise limited area of attention.